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Post by Necropenii on Feb 17, 2008 19:50:59 GMT -5
I'd love to know how to improve this. Click image for larger.
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Post by CHaMY on Feb 17, 2008 20:31:00 GMT -5
ok here we go with the first LA review i have ever done and on this site! haha im just going to throw some ideas your way and give it a rating on what the overall outcome and other stuff which i have explained in the pinned topic in this forum =] Firstly, i love the concept, very simple idea and you have pulled it off well the flow of the flames goes well with the stock image Areas to improve Background, im thinking you could add one, possible a city scene with him standing alone in the middle of a street of sidewalk. This shows us that lucifer walks amongst us all of the time. Once the background is in, lighting would be good as there are areasof shadow on the stock which dont correspong to the background so well. This can be worked on with a background and a layer with white burshing on overlay to set a light source etc... Other than that there is not much ic an say to improve on, it is much harder to review LA than sigs :S overall rating from me, 5/10 reasoning - basic concept, not too much skill envolved but effective overall outcome, relative amounts of the principles of artwork applied =] hope this helps <3
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Post by Necropenii on Feb 17, 2008 21:21:28 GMT -5
Thank you, thank you. I was going for something simplistic but I love the city idea. Might try to work that into this. Your review is appreciated very much.
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Post by CHaMY on Feb 18, 2008 9:16:46 GMT -5
glad it helps, i would love to see the updated version in the city posted plz
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Post by JayJay on Feb 18, 2008 11:23:05 GMT -5
yeah i agree much with Chamy, Maybe even a thin border... ?
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Post by hellsangel on Feb 18, 2008 11:56:18 GMT -5
Wow i think thats pretty awesome ;D.... although needs a blurred background... an i idea i thought of for a background could be a city split in two with half on fire and destoryed and the other half like normal.... probs wouldnt work but i think that would be kool
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Post by CHaMY on Feb 18, 2008 15:51:32 GMT -5
with large art, u look at something and images just start appearing of what would look awesome... im thinking lucifer standing in a city, with the smudged people showing loads of fast movement around him and him standing there still, hw cool wud tht be!?
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Post by JayJay on Feb 18, 2008 17:36:26 GMT -5
Its allright having all these ideas... but some of the things.. however amazing they may sound... are a bit impossible...dont ya think?
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Post by Kain on Feb 18, 2008 17:37:18 GMT -5
nothing is impossible with photoshop!
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Post by JayJay on Feb 18, 2008 17:57:09 GMT -5
True, to true
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Post by Necropenii on Feb 18, 2008 18:05:44 GMT -5
^_^ So many nice ideas. Unfortunately, I won't be able to work on it much till the weekend. Damn school. >_<
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Post by CHaMY on Feb 19, 2008 13:40:48 GMT -5
well ill look 4wd to the wknd then
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Post by Bj on Feb 21, 2008 15:05:41 GMT -5
'Nothing Impossible' Mr Kain? I thought you said no one could vector!
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Post by Kain on Feb 21, 2008 15:09:26 GMT -5
no idea what ur talking about... i said im no good at vector.. but thats about it.. ive seen some awesome vector work before
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Post by Bj on Feb 21, 2008 15:26:54 GMT -5
I saw it somewhere....but anyhow, once I get a photoshop I'll prove you 'wrong' My sis' program is slightly better - not much though....she's Shamoo btw sorry, that's shamooo
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